Posted 09 February 2012 - 09:07 PM
Here it is:
Your voice was magical
You had a heart of gold
You had a beautiful mind,body and soul
Your eyes were like diamonds
Your smile was like paradise
That is something I didn't need to think about twice
But even though you are gone
And you are no longer near
Heaven would be missing an angel
If you had stayed here
So spread your wings and begin to soar
At least up in heaven
They can't hurt you anymore
Posted 09 February 2012 - 09:41 PM
Well, this is my opinion: It's a-m-a-z-i-n-g! Girl, you are talented! I must confess I loved it, I loved the whole poem, but especially this part: "So spread your wings and begin to soar/ At least up in heaven/ They can't hurt you anymore"
I have also written poems and a "novel" about Michael, but since I'm mexican, it is all written in Spanish. Anyway, I think I will never show them... I'm too shy!
Your poem was beautiful, and you are right: the most important thing is that you wrote it from the bottom of your heart, and it's obvious that you made with love.
Congratulations! It's just perfect!
Posted 11 February 2012 - 12:42 PM
I know that I don't have to go far...
All I have to do is
To look deep inside my heart...
Posted 13 February 2012 - 02:11 PM
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